What do you think of this poem?

Hi. I love your poem, it's very touching and sublime . I think it's very well writing, it flows beautifully , each stanza said some thing significant, the mood, scene and the image tell of story of a picture words. You did this very nicely, your poetic skills is vivid and you have an active imagination. Keep on writing and blessing others with your gift of writing, i just see to many( "and") other than that , very good work.